Indifferent You Are Comments

Very lovely poemn Shamik, true to the elegance of your culture and language.

Glorious images to portray the indifference of the title. 'Reasons forsaken, I will now spring blind folded along the bank of the river'. I particularly like how nature is so affected and plays such an important part too. The last stanza is outstanding Shamik and I enjoyed it thoroughly. 10 love Karin (although the voting system doesn't seem to work) .

wonderful cognitive metaphor A senseless flow along with a sense of direction wonderful meditative poem 10