Wednesday, September 16, 2020

Indifference Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found her standing on the Ellis Bridge
Across the Sabarmati
She had promised she would be there
Once the Poets' weekly meet was over
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Ravinder Kumar Soni
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Varsha M 16 September 2020

I wish I had developed her kind of indifference Towards all pleasant things Towards all things I liked Her difference is like the one the river has Towards its banks...good inspiring words.

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Varsha M 16 September 2020

The meets she usually avoids Deciphering verses was a difficult task for her Understanding poets the more she says I do not recite my poems in her presence Because I do not want to lose her..... Fear of losing her Bury you under earth How about introducing new thing On a trial and error basis. Good inception and bringing forth. Admirations sir.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 September 2020

A well composed poem. Truly lovely....10+++

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