Friday, March 21, 2014

Indifference Comments

Rating: 2.8

I'm just another toy for you
Though, I don't really mind.
You said it's always about me
But I'm in love with you so much
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John Leach
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Aria Siren 03 April 2014

Oooh I like the last line of this. The simple short form is good because it doesn't distract from the point you're making at the end. Well done. Just my interpretation but it sounds like both of these poems are about the same person.

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