Thursday, July 7, 2011

Indian Summer Comments

Rating: 4.8

Weary bird sitting in the branch
Looks at the clouds as ahead they march
Behind the cloud the vast mass of azure sky
Does not bode well as the season looks dry
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Anil Kumar Panda
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nice imagery :) enjoyed it very much :)

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Jisha Ct 14 July 2011

nice depiction of indian summer....very nice

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Rekha Mandagere 12 July 2011

Friend, nice depiction of Indian dry summer.But the most dominant feature of urban summer is that it gives spirit for all metros, flyovers and tall buildings to emerge in pleasant summer!

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Priyanka Agrawalla 12 July 2011

nice one Tiku.. u brought out the summer and the pain with it very well... Keep writing :)

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem '*A busy street*' on page 1.

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