Indian Bureaucrats Comments

Shows potential with room to work, keep it up.

The last verse says about the richness of this write. Good one.

Astounding, moving, poem that speaks to the ills of bureaucrats [in most socities] that poets dare illuminate...good job my friend and a ten.

indian bureaucrats is really among ur very best poems...keep it up.

Educated but knowledge obsolete.truelyreflected in words and action..... bureaucracy thrives under the cloak of misterial responsibility and they are superficial kings of today....no responsibility and no action against...life of so many people just o be decided by them.. so much pity....loelyjob 10 readmien... a hate, love syndrome....a day to start with

Hello, Good enough, a lot of hints generated from your discontent. Lot of meaningful things said if one reads between the lines. 'Life can be purchased and sold There's a job beyond life The job I have to accomplish tomorrow' yes I agree. One little correction I found, please read it again and may think of it. That is change the word 'disable' to 'disabled', hope you wanted to mean that na? Gautam

a really interesting poem that sounds an antidote voted10 surya

You have painted reality in raw and rabid details yet with refreshing colors.