Indian Brave Comments

Dave I felt your words and could see the mishap happening to the indian braves as the still water were of the slaves on the ship...to and fo...are you into history? if so stay in touch...very honest write...

I love this....living in Indian Nation, I certainly feel the plight of the natives here..blessings

Very good poem. Thanks. Please read my poem dave, my friend. comment.

Nice flow, to the point, a very good poem! ! !

As a native doing their best to continue and honor our traditions, I loved this one. Thank you.

very nice & too the point spiritual poem Dave.

you are absolutely correct in these lines, and the dreams given by our predecessors lead our country to become most democratic country of the world...

Its simply amazing! !

great poem. great topic.

A great poem, Dave. All fights, beliefs, dreams get passed on from generation to generation...

I like this Dave; my heart always goes out to the 'Original People'. Good write.

nice. nice. nice. 20 character short. -.-

great..sweet and simple ..

its short and sweet and gets right to the point while still captivating me. awesome job!

Great topic to write on. Inspires me for my next poem. Keep up the good work, thank you.

wow! ! ! at first the title catches the attention bcoz i am an Indian. I am proud to be an Indian! many of the countries looted us, but still we are rich. pakisthan and bangladesh parted from us but still we are strong.28 states are different in language, culture, religion, dress patterns, cuisines, literature and so on. but still we are one. we have only one emotion, one feeling - INDIA! thanks for your poem, your observation and respect towards our country is appreciable. Fighting for the land that was rightfully theirs no words! ! ! ! thrilled while reading this! ! ! thanks a lot! ! ! ! ! ! !

nice....all for the forgotten heroes

Since poetry covers just about every venue of our lives past and present, our work is very important. Thanks for sharing this poem with me. I write about many varied things and subject. I find this poem very fitting because we must continue to tell their story too because it is one of the most important stories as America was built. great poem with every word being useful and meaningful to what you said. I will stay in touch and read more of your work. Thanks again for the invite. J. L.

Your words are the fire..it hot every ear that listen and flame the spirit to burn any fear...Great words not only easy to listen but deeper as lesson! u got it! _Unwritten soul

greatest injustice in American history! good poem!