India -My Motherland Comments

An insightful, patriotic rendition from the heart. A lovely tribute to your beautiful fatherland written with conviction.

Autumn is the season of pain, Mind wants to go far away land, Inner and outer surface become full With Joy Unlimited,

The rainy season is like rain of melody, Heart wishes to fall in love, Rain brings new hope to relive the past.

It propels me to rise at dawn, Walk the way with loaded heart. Wealth of joy brings wealth of Love.

Here the season is diverse, With the diverse Emotions, The Summer is vagrant,

India is my motherland, The heart the center of the world,

I Love My Motherland as the Land Where Divine comes in many Forms. Land always after my heart and Being

Autumn is the season of pain, Mind wants to go far away land, Inner and outer surface become full With Joy Unlimited,

Wealth of joy brings wealth of Love. The rainy season is like rain of melody, Heart wishes to fall in love,

Here the season is diverse, With the diverse Emotions, The Summer is vagrant,

India is my motherland, The heart the center of the world,

Beautiful poem....10+++////

I love My Motherland with all its Days and Nights, Thousands hours of pain and sacrifice....A great patriotic poem Prabir! Well penned....................10

A nice patriotic poem, loved it. Breathes there the man, with soul so dead, Who never to himself hath said, This is my own, my native land! Whose heart hath ne’er within him burn’d, As home his footsteps he hath turn’d, (Sir Walter Scott)

A fantastic patriotic poem from the heart of the poet.10++++++

A long and detailed, impressionist portrait of India, which is a country I would like to visit after reading many poems about this country. a very strong conclusion, 'India is a Dreamland/ where no one wishes to die'. Good idea to add the map.

Diverse emotions! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wonderful patriotic poem. Great rhythm. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.

There are powerful lines in this write that put INDIA as a wonderful nation. " India is.a dreamland where no one wish to die" and the opening lines, " Indiia it the heart..center of the world.

A wonderful and lovely poem for Motherland. Your love for your country pours in this write. " I love my motherland with all its days and nights." " Land always after my heart and being." Beautiful lines that attest to your eternal love and heartfelt promise to your Motherland.