India Comments

So nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. An impressive and intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10

madness of modernity, enjoyment on the stake of chastity, ruined attitude ans at last a lone meadow of poverty, a lovely poem with great correcting thought, a lesson to learn and look into the inner world that we keep...thanks a lot and thanks for such poem which is in need for the human civilisation..God bless you with peace

A well narrated poem.... with a few lines you have clearly drew the picture of luxury loving new generation, and the forgotten people who have nothing with them, no money, no pride, no self respect, but only hunger...and whom we want to hide behind the screen.. I love the last line very much....it's so touching.... -Rain...

For some reason, this one made me laugh~ I like my mad life! very nice

a very impressive poem, it becomes very difficult for us to accept these new traditions ruining our great culture and morals.