Thursday, September 4, 2014

Index Finger Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can set out on a world tour
On foot, holding your fingers,
Your beautiful, slim fingers.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Bri Edwards 25 July 2017

OH! COPYRIGHT RESERVED! well, let me know if you don't want me to use it and i shall remove it from showcase, BUT it IS already on PH, so i doubt you will object. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 26 July 2017

You are most welcome to use this poem for your showcase. Rather I am glad that you chose to do it.

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Bri Edwards 25 July 2017

i am putting together my/our August 2017 showcase. i am going to use this poem. i noticed this time your use of enclench and i looked it up, as i only can recall hearing the word clench/-ed/-ing, not enclench in my life. i find a definition of clench which does not fit well, but i get the idea. and a French word enclencher which is a worse fit. in any case, i leave enclench and am happy to use the poem. Thanks. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 26 July 2017

@Bri Edwards, Thanks. I am glad you chose this poem.

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2014

i added this to MyPoemList. so, ..........did you cut them off or saw them off? bri :) yes, i like to take a snack with me wherever i go away from the refrigerator.

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Khairul Ahsan 28 March 2020

Thanks for your comment and for honoring the poem by taking it to your 'MyPoemList'. Please see my comment on your latest poem, lamenting on not getting enough comments from the PH readers.

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Soulful Heart 05 October 2014

well kudos to the pink fingers in ur life and the ink in your pen that honours and makes the fingers so special in your world..

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Khairul Ahsan 28 March 2020

@Soulful Heart, Thanks for the appreciative comment that has inspired me a lot.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 09 September 2014

wow.. very nice. how you love her pink fingers is so evident more than a praise more than a motivation more than an inspiration

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Khairul Ahsan 21 March 2020

@Naida Nepascua Supnet, Thank you very much for your elaborate comment. Immensely inspired.

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Sandra Feldman 05 September 2014

How very lovely. 19th century Romanticism lives on in this precious work.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 March 2020

Thanks for the generous appreciation, @Sandra Feldman.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 September 2014

If a finger could inspire so much what other parts will....! It reminds me the poem Coy Mistress. Poet defines thousand birth not sufficient to illustrate the beauty of beloved her every inch of body. Nice.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 March 2020

Thank you, dear poet @Pranab K Chakraborty, for reading the poem and leaving an appreciative comment. Much inspired.

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