Monday, September 19, 2016

Indeterminate Comments

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What was it that made me so bitter
Toward life and my very existence?
Was it perhaps my unanswered prayers
To a God who chose to keep his distance?
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Lora Colon
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Brian Markey 28 September 2016

Fate does not decide what happens to you, you do, life is a trial, you are in control if you truly want to be, get that thinking cap on and reevaluate how you deal with events be they good or bad, I used to blame everything and anything till I learned it was the easy option, changes in life are yours to deal with but you've got to be up for it. Good Luck.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2016

Unanswered prayers! ! But still the the faith; the faith of hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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