Sunday, October 1, 2006

Indescribable Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rekindling a memory, of a time way back when
I was just a little school boy, around the age of ten
Trying to perceive of another’s life, so worth living
Or maybe as a fox in an endless forest, for roaming
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 October 2006

V.G.>>>Nice Work...Meticulous attention to Structure and Meter, here...Stanzas are tight and crisp, allowing for a smooth flux throughout the Poem....A Fine Penning, V-Ghost'''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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