Independence In My Thought Comments

I hope your Independence Day was full of joy! A fine writer you are! ! !

This is a phenomenal piece carved out from the depth of your heart.......enamoured of one's country............. very well composed

Oh! really a very fantastic poem dear. I liked it.

As a duty from core of heartTreating more thanTo show the formalitiesAbove all religion, castAbove all economic statusAnd the so called aristocracyIn our society. A nice meesage with great thoughts.