Independence Comments

I like the articulation of the piece and the rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Karthik.

You have summed up independence very well. A good first poem.

Very interesting and so factual. I relate to this poem well. How many years of study of Indian history! I wish they would put poems like this inbetween texts. this is so original. Loved reading it.

A powerful poem, Karthik. Peace