Independence Comments

For our country, Myanmar(Burma) ..the independence day was on 4th Jan 1948....not very soon after yours.. i think you might know the history of Burma...your poem is really good you are brave and strong enough to write out your spirit and attitude..I appreciate this!

I like it, it's very good.

thank you very much for your opinions...!

it has already become machines in all possible forms.You have to fight against these machines to render the world perfect and die trying