Independance Day! Comments

an interesting poem, Jameel Ahmed..Everyone of us know the problem, but we do not know how to solve the problem..

The title just caught my immediate attention and I said to myself it is worth reading it and guess what: I am right! This well crafted and touching poem is exceptional and clearly shows your honesty and great potential in the Poetry World! Congratulations! WELCOME! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

empowering.this one word's enough, very nice concept. And that title is so eye-catching.well done.

A great idea, a great poem.

nicely written! good marks!

This is very well written - a portrays an interesting patriotism with a little hint of satire~ A very well written piece of poetry~

very good jameel you personified an abstraction very well...being patriotic demands being practical as well

excellent poem, very well penned with deep ideas.........10+++

You’ve now got an open cage to live in.....this line seems satirical to me..... yet another attempt to say what every other person complaining about how we are still not free.......nice attempt to say that again...... some lines were good too though.........all in all an above average poem.......... ;)