Tuesday, February 13, 2018

Indefference Comments

Rating: 5.0

From here silent though;
base on the soft baritone
answering bird soprano
yet; my door stayed closed,
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Mohammed Abideen Oluwalonsola
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Thanks my Great poet

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Akhtar Jawad 29 April 2018

Yet; Daadaa health make my heart throb. That's nice.

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Keti Kvariani 10 March 2018

It appears as rose

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From here my heart leap and thank with gratitude

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Scott Winkler 27 February 2018

I felt sorry about the poet

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Nifemi Ola 18 February 2018

fantastic.....

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Rachil Li 17 February 2018

silent kiss me on temple

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Mathew Rich 15 February 2018

I love the last line of the poem.Through thesame line joy and hope make my caddle fired.

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JAMES 13 February 2018

I donate 100 for this lovely imagery

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Nick Nelly 13 February 2018

Abideeen you have done great.

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John Raph 13 February 2018

Lovely poem

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Hammad salim 13 February 2018

wonderful

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