Demands come
Frequently to me;
Dead I'm not
But die suddenly!
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My second reading of this gave me a better picture of the situation here. Not all poems we don`t get are bad poems. At times a closer reading is needed to value the poetry. Good effort.
This 'poetic warnimg' is simply SUPERB! ! The warning, the meaning, the metaphores the images, simply extraordinary. A poem to cherish and never forget!
Mesmerizing poem, a very pleasant read, Enjoyed very much, Dear Mahtab!
Congratulations, Mahtab, for a well deserved accolade.
Beautiful poem full of metaphors and images. A well crafted write.
Warmest good wishes Mahtab! Congratulations for the honour. Top stars
Preparation for a marriage is a grand affair. I can understand the anxiety. But once married, everything will be happy and peaceful, dear Mahtab.
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Congrats! ! ! Mahtab this is wonderful poem. I liked the concept and theme. Fantastic
Congrats for being The Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! Fabulous poem most deserving
I agree two people never have calm mood always but that doesn't make marriage a bondage stuff. Life in fact becomes more smooth when two support well and believe in coordination than in ruling. Congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day.
Getting married is never a one day's decision, it's a long time process but always leads to true happiness. Beautifully thought, sublimest told.5 Stars to hold and to keep. Awesome poem
Such a wonderful poem to read.