Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Saturday, September 1, 2007

^ Indebted Comments

Rating: 4.1

^Indebted

When I was poor
And always sure
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Adeline Foster
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Meta Morphosis 14 September 2013

Thank you for the suggestion, I did enjoy this. Did you read others of mine? I welcome your comments.

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Bri Edwards 25 May 2013

adeline, i had to laugh at the ending. MY creditors get theirs on time..... unless i forget; i must not be rich. i enjoyed the rhyme scheme. thanks for sharing. bri

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Richard Prosper 14 February 2013

Hahaha! That's great. It's very concise, funny, and wise.

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Dave Walker 12 August 2012

Really like it, I've had them knocking at the door in the past, I gave them the same answer, some time this year. A great poem.

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Valerie Dohren 18 April 2012

Very good, and very well rhymed. Short and to the point.

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Karen Deeks 18 March 2012

A nice twist of fate... A lovely write which encourages a smile.. Thanks. Karen

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J.b. Lebuert 23 February 2012

What do I owe you for this little gem?

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Heyyou Boy 01 January 2012

lol love it! ! ! Refreshing.

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Brian Caffrey 01 February 2010

Very relevant in the times we live in! ! Great use of rhyme. 10 ++++

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Meggie Gultiano 26 November 2009

Many can relate to this write of yours, Adeline.It is so true.And I love your rhyme and rhythm.A nice piece.

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Rich in rhythm and rhyme and also refreshing and rewarding to read.

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Frank Cannon 10 June 2008

You wrote. I read. Now I am indebted to you! !

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Anna Pacheco 28 November 2007

Oh I just loved this one - I so can relate.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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