^Indebted
When I was poor
And always sure
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adeline, i had to laugh at the ending. MY creditors get theirs on time..... unless i forget; i must not be rich. i enjoyed the rhyme scheme. thanks for sharing. bri
Hahaha! That's great. It's very concise, funny, and wise.
Really like it, I've had them knocking at the door in the past, I gave them the same answer, some time this year. A great poem.
A nice twist of fate... A lovely write which encourages a smile.. Thanks. Karen
Very relevant in the times we live in! ! Great use of rhyme. 10 ++++
Many can relate to this write of yours, Adeline.It is so true.And I love your rhyme and rhythm.A nice piece.
Rich in rhythm and rhyme and also refreshing and rewarding to read.
Thank you for the suggestion, I did enjoy this. Did you read others of mine? I welcome your comments.