Saturday, July 14, 2018

Incredible Rainbow... Lightening Snap9credit Aj) Comments

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Once I was travelling across the darkness
of the cross country
no lights but lightening
ever so frightening
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Valsa George 26 July 2018

You have described a frightening experience in all its horror! Powerful diction, great flow!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2018

I did not have a camera then else it would have been really proven... this poetry is just the whole truth- - - all my true poems need no recommendation... they speak for themselves Thanks Valsa ma'am

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Akhtar Jawad 19 July 2018

Once I was travelling across the darkness of the cross country no lights but lightening ever so frightening......Journey of life becomes pleasant when we see a rainbow.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2018

and only experienced folks like you know it Last week I was on road for five days 1700 km @my age

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