Thursday, October 16, 2008

Incorrigible Comments

Rating: 5.0

Maybe sometimes I act with a little bit of avarice
Or maybe sometimes I’m just abominable
I know that the word “sorry” don’t absolve my acts
And maybe I repeat this word (sorry) too much, that’s a fact
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Maria del Pilar Guzman
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Paola Vásquez 19 October 2008

really nice, I love this one :) je je espero que escribas más... pronto...saludos desde La Paz! bye bye

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Emily Oldham 17 October 2008

i love this poem... your choice of vocab works well... like the ending especially. keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 October 2008

finely expressed! ....eloquent..........10+

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