Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Inconvenient Novelty Comments

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long forgotten by passerby
she rocks with screams
trembling under rains decent
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Aria Siren
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Alla Simone 15 September 2012

You said this was very difficult to compose, I think it is very brilliant for the reader. Nice job. You captured the emotion well. Fav. lines: choking on pity. strangled by contempt. nursing fate. This is simple but powerful.

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