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I love this poem full of great wisdom as fame is fickle, better to be just ordinary to live life simply and allow our true goodness to make our family and friends happy! Excellent write!

fame and honor ultimately leads to . taste bitter-sweet wine of praise or blame In some form or shape Does scandal or shame assault.......................very true said

Beautiful poem with great message.... I agree with your write. If we all can write our fate then we can become what we like. Where there is a name, there is defame too. Rise and fall are everywhere. Can anyone decides where one should be? If fate pushes one to water, to survive he learns swimming. Then he started searching for coming up. On the way he gets tempted to rise above everyone. So his greed plays the next role. Unknowingly he starts moving towards next steps. Then he starts hunting for name and fame. He realizes when he falls down. Better would have been as you said in concluding lines, least he should have known to the world. Very thoughtful write. I loved reading it.