Sunday, May 5, 2019

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If you were a bird, I would let you perch
Upon my shoulder, close to my ear;
Your feathery wings would caress my face
As your sweet song blessed the atmosphere
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 22 November 2019

, don't let my wife read this! ! Don't 'they' sometimes PIN lockets to blouses? OUCHY! ! ! roots in your heart? ! can you spell H E A R T B U R N! ! ? A bird perching on your shoulder could leave somethin' with an odor, and (if an ostrich) could leave a boulder of bird! And not cleaned up, it soon might molder! bri :) favorite stanza is 3rd. to MyPoemList

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Sandra Feldman 05 May 2019

Lovely, beautiful proof of love. Said in such an original and charming way. A delightful poem for today that will still be read with great pleasure in times to come. A work of undisputable poetic, sentimental and lyric worth that easily touches the heart.

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Ruta Mohapatra 05 May 2019

' you shall reap the love you've sown '...a wonderful line!

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