Incomplete Story Comments

What a wonderful story of love. Very captivating that captures a true and one of a kind love that holds us spellbound. Beautifully written. Loved reading it.

She came from the other end of the river and I joined from this end And we submerged in the current of Heart ......superb the whole poem on the tone of Ghazal; enjoyable; pleasure to read this earthly life is incomplete traveling every incomplete can not complete though come together live together, die together but it's true that both incomplete journey can make ease the whole life......

What an expression and what a picture. Blowed me with both.

बहुत सही लिखा आपने अधूरी कहानियां ही इंसान को हमेशा सोचने पर मजबूर करती है

Some stories remains incomplete and they gets remembered Nice poem

Class............10 Neither she said anything and Nor did I Our eyes did the talking and heart understood

Outstanding poem........Both versions are fantastic. Loved reading it and will write my poem on this..10

She sheds some tears and this shedding expresses emotion and agony. From the other end of the river you hear her beats of heart and feel the emotion. Life is complete when love is there. This poem is very interestingly penned. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ. दिल खुश हो गया अगर जिंदगी देती हैं ग़म, तो तुम साथ मेरा देना।। बाँट लेगे ग़म थोड़ा - थोड़ा, . बस तुम साथ मेरा देना।। मैं कुछ आँसू तुम्हारे पोछू, कुछ आँसू तुम मेरे पोछना।। बस तुम साथ मेरा देना।। Rated 100++