Sunday, November 29, 2015

Incomplete Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

Age old is this story
In all ages, people heard it
It remains yet incomplete
An endless epic it is
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C. P. Sharma
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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 November 2015

Fantastic melody and wonderful meaning urging human to collect grains of happiness from little things in life has made the poem Superb. Thanks for sharing.10+ points. Regards.

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Shakil Ahmed 29 November 2015

In its smallness are packed Ripened life’s juicy gains Waste not these moments Bathe in the bliss it rains- - Beautiful poetic lnes, well composed poem, thanks for sharing,

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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