I think it's a great poetry,
It describes a beautiful thing,
When I read it,
It gives me real peace and serenity,
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I think your friend has an incomplete grasp of the nature of poetry, It is supposed to be able to delve into the myriad emotions of the heart, the layers of spirituality of the soul, and the contrary thoughts of the mind. It can be humorous or serious, playful or sober-sided. So write on, my friend, write on! 10
As it gives me no idea About the harsh reality, So the poetry is not really great in the true sense........yeah; exactly me feel too it tends to me to think sometimes there is great poem but in the time of finding out the heart meaning of that find nothing.......oh superficial everywhere......