Thursday, March 1, 2007

Incomplete Pleasure Comments

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depressed and dejected
i looked into her eyes,
unaltered they seemed..
emotionless and undetterd she stood...
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bhavin palan
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Amanda Norton 20 April 2007

I too have felt this way towards someone.... so I really relate... it is beautiful

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Bhavin Palan 18 April 2007

this is my fav.poem...

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