Sunday, March 2, 2014

Incomplete Picture Comments

Rating: 5.0

How can I draw your picture
For you appear
On my heart’s screen
Creating variety of scene
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V P Mahur
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Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Heartfelt poem, beautifully written and very descriptive! Love it.

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Barbara Nixon 05 March 2014

Heartfelt poem, beautifully written and very descriptive! Love it.

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Cassandra Jasmine 02 March 2014

So descriptive and as Beach Girl stated, the lines Like a shining star Showing path to my stray soul were beautiful!

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Tanya Gupta 02 March 2014

once again a descriptive peice of your.no one can paint a picture of their loved ones, for they are always moving in our mind......excellently penned with wonderfull thought..............love your poems.........thanks

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Beach Girl 02 March 2014

What a touching and beautiful picture you drew with this lovely romantic poem. I enjoyed, 'Often you appear Like a shining star Showing path to my stray soul.'

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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