Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Incomplete Perfection. Comments

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So slow the minutes of the day,
Are etched in your hard wood floors.
In the charnel house, where your spirits lay,
Only resentment is something you adore.
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Livi Topley
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Blue Eyes 08 August 2008

i really love the imagery u used.nicely done.

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T.j Peterson 07 August 2008

I love this one, it almost paints a picture, great job with the wording

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Existential Despair 06 August 2008

So much well expressed pain and emotion hiding in every line that i can't pick which one strikes at my heart the most

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