Sunday, January 20, 2013

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Taking along your memories
Came I once more to lake old
Wet were eyes with tears warm
Still on lips was smile bold
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Jahan Zeb
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Sallam Yassin 22 January 2013

incomplete is sweet and sad sweet one is to be in love but sad one- the whole world is complete when you are alone with memories of love/ great work of art Jahan as always God bless you

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Valsa George 22 January 2013

Never get lost in old memories! Make your present a happy one! New blooms will definitely appear as it is still spring for you! ! An emotion charged write! !

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Unwritten Soul 21 January 2013

Glad you share your English version of Tere Bin Ham Adhoore Hein with others, cheers! _Soul

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Valerie Dohren 20 January 2013

Beautiful poem, very romantic and nostalgic.

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