Saturday, August 27, 2011

Incompetence Comments

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What is it you want from me,
what have I to boast?
Forgive me if I don't have
what it is you want the most.
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Stefanie Fontker 27 August 2011

Your last four lines are absolutely beautiful, you have done very well here. I hope to see more of your poetry soon.

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