Friday, August 10, 2018

Incidental Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wasp is talking by my ear
He has a low sultry voice whose effect
Is not entirely lost on me. But I wish him to be
Anyplace else. Wish his offspring great harm.
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 11 August 2018

absolutely amazing my friend; you've captured an essence of nature so completely, in all it's oddness, all it's mystery, all it's glory. superb.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2018

It is not entirely lost rather it is continuously humming with appropriate attitude. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2018

A brilliant poem nicely executed.10

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