Thursday, July 19, 2007

Inches Away Comments

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You came out of a dream,
and stood there before me,
inches away from the tips of my fingers. I
wanted to hold you,
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 20 July 2007

A sombre romantic piece about what might have been. You leave the reader wondering, and sad too - sharing your feeling of loss and yet strangely optimistic about the future too. Lovely poem. Allie xxxx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 20 July 2007

A dream lover David, so close and yet to far away...10

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David Harris

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Bradfield, England
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