Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, November 27, 2009

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Life seemed to be in haze and smoke
Every one preferred to interfere and poke
They had all the means to excite and provoke
But I started it well with brilliant stroke
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Gillena Cox 01 December 2009

My favourite verse 'God and fortune favours the brave only You mind yourself alone and lonely What can be termed as grave and disastrous? | Can be brought under control with efforts continuous' written in strong faith; enjoyed this poem very much

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george george 29 November 2009

An interesting piece, I like it better with each read.

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Vijay Menon 29 November 2009

a peaceful life is a life of bliss, liked your poem and the beautiful viewpoint you presented

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Natasha Rathod 28 November 2009

Life seemed to be in haze and smoke Every one preferred to interfere and poke.lovely n exemplary poem...10

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Catrina Heart 27 November 2009

You can be turned into fine jewel Making full use of opportunity and excel Rest all can be reality and fact Luck may also favour if employed with tact ------ well said...favour and luck are to those who work hard to meet their goals....Great poem to ponder at...............Thanks! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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