Incertitude Comments

What an earth that was sliding beneath the feet precarious dimensions making the vision blurred....................awesome write 10/10

I feel an eternity unravelling in these lines...deep thoughts, well written...

ufff...marvellous, marvellous...a very strong use of metaphor and written in the way i adore most....your writng style is excellent ma'am and i hope i'll read other works soon too...thanks 10++++ and A+++..collected rgds asif