Wednesday, July 4, 2012

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just a girl in capable of holding in fears
but a girl very capable of letting go tears

she hides from others so they won't know
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madison ann
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Madison Ann 12 July 2012

shes just a girl whos tired of reliving her past she hates the things shes done in the past but she wont fix em

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Fantastic poem, ... Good rhyme scheme, ... Just, you've put the reader in so much confusion that we dont really know the state of the girl, if she's dead or..... Maybe u should look into that, ... ~TT~

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