Sunday, September 14, 2008

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Rating: 4.8

Love left me in an email
The noise of new mail ringing like a bell
Its from her, I see the name I know so well
Is it a invite to chat or a jpeg to see
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Ben Littlechild
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Duh Huh 29 July 2009

Wow, i love how you created this poem. You took something we already taking for granted and turned it into are with a poem. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. :)

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Dear Ben, you write a very good poetry. I liker this poem because it suggests a New Generation of love poems, fit for the 21st century. Be careful pioneer of this kind since you have a talent. I give you a 9+. Be wise new poetry is in your hands Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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June Feir-Cruz 15 September 2008

Love and loss in modern day technology. Love is still love and loss is still loss regardless which century we're at. Ben, you write great poetry! ! ! ! A '10'.

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