Thursday, December 9, 2004

Inaugural - Top Up Your Lips? Comments

Rating: 3.2

Two tiny pimples,
imperceptible they were,
had just appeared,
and overnight.
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Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Lenchen Elf 09 December 2004

Sweet memory of youth, even to the rogue pimples, everyone may find themselves in this somewhere: -)

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Kelly Allen Vinal 09 December 2004

Awesome, as always Herbert!

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Allan James Saywell 09 December 2004

Herbert your encounter's seem to last longer then mine did, mabe you had more time on your hand's, pimples seemed to blend in with my ruddy complection back in the old day's, not a bad story and not one cussing word you are a good example for those young budding poet's Regard's allan

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