Inaudible Whispers Comments

When in dark despair drowned I was thinking, joy was nowhere around A gentle breeze from the upland peaks Came and patted on my cheeks Softly whispering- ‘joy is now here’......fantastic beginning of a joyful moment. The style of composition of this poem is unique and adorable. From top to bottom the inscription is interesting and incisive. Concluding two lines are much impressive and meaningful. Beautiful poem really.10

Life is not all bed of roses...joy may come and go, just take life as it is wishful as always!

beautiful poem of nature. beautiful that heart, feeling that inaudible whisper.

It's a fabulous verse permeated with hope.I read it many times and felt deep joy in my heart. The refrain is thematic. It makes me think if we can imagine a life without Nature. The line I'd always remember: ''When days seem inert and grey Don’t be in a hurry to say “Joy is nowhere around”'.....joy's always there beaming from the hearts like yours!

Simply superb. The essence of your poem is very well summed up in last two stanzas. I will have [! ] to read it again as my favourite.

A lovely poem with encouragements & hopes to live. When all my yearnings got shattered........The blazing sun from behind the hills......... Beamingly affirmed-‘joy is now here..... Very nice

Your poem brings boundless joy to those hearts drowned in 'dark despair'. The poem is soothing and refreshing, beams with life's positivity and gaiety. Rated this poem a well deserved 10/10. 'When I thought I was drifting afloat Without any moorings on my boat A crystal drop precariously balancing On the serrated edge of a leaf dancing Playfully chimed-‘joy is now here’ The best stanza. Liked the most, of all!

Made me a puzzle to think over most lovable write of this poem, , , , , , ,

Lovely Valsa - similar content to my latest write Those Days.

loved the title as well as the poem, , , awsom work..

Joy can be found anywhere and everywhere. If we would only open our hearts and minds to it. Even in the simplest matter and the things that seems of no significance to us joy will finds its way there. Very good details and full of sweet and savory words. I enjoyed this delectable treat. A good write.

Sunprincess, so glad to know that you derive joy through my poems! This comment of yours has made my day too! ! Thanks! Thanks a lot! !

A poet to the core, you can see both the sides of life and you would like to show the brighter side to the fellow poets. Dear madam Valsa, it is a poem that reflects life in its true proportions... Hats off to you for this great spill of thoughts.

Wait to see the cycle of seasons change From winter’s haze to spring’s lovesome range! .....this is I call hope and hope sustains life. Entire composition makes an enjoyable read bringing despair and hope. Beautifully written

If you observe closely there is hope everywhere. It is attitude that is important. One can see a loss in a win or see win in a loss. Thank you fora beautiful poem which is very positive filled with joy.

The inaudible voice whispering about the presence of joy in life is heard only by a soul with a marked positive bent of thought...and the targeted listener of this voice is the one who is always in a hurry to declare the absence of joy...the poem is rich with the positive vision of life with the strong presence of joy in it..Valsa ji...very beautiful! ! !

joy is now here! kudos poet for this soul-reviving poem.