Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Inaudible Cry Comments

Rating: 4.0

The sky is limitless and blue
The sea is large but we don't have a clue
The voice of the memories whispering in your ears
Too sad to see and too painful to hear
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Shayne De Vera
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 February 2010

nice work jame your words are as mysterious as you are

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I'm me 02 February 2010

I like it! somewhat mysterious (second stanza) , like the title would suggest, but still easily understood. I was expecting something more... paradoxical, given the title, which is an oxymoron :) Keep writing! -Cheng Zheng

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