~ Inaesthetic Global Pollution ~ Comments

Emotions run deep. Very reminiscent of the misguided nature of yesteryear when the slightest thing was confused and condoned. In regards to your other poem, I believe people focused too much on the title than the meaning of maintaining innocence. The great thing about poetry is the freedom of expression and this should always be maintained. Your piece clearly shows the impact of the pain of the last few weeks. Quite an interesting style of bombarding the reader with a shower of words both common and uncommon causing much when the main theme is well documented. The intensity is truly felt. A talented poet must remain to write.

A poem with a strong statement.The theme is well developed and sustained.10.

The crazy order of things and the crazy order of the world we live in. None lives the world in a buoyant state we found it in! Great write. Indeed this poem gets into the fabric of our culture today and what is sadly considered a norm. My prayer is that our must dos must remain our call to action. Nicely penned!

I just don't know what to say.I haven't the eloquence of some.

Hon’ble Poet Terence George Craddock I’m indeed feeling relived again that you voiced against such ‘Foulmouthed’ … ‘Vilemouthed’…’Vilebulimic’…and many many thanks by all hearts… Total sanitization is not possible …but such ‘Motormouthed’ persons must be shown Red Card [read ‘Red Eyes’]…to flush out them from the Tournament of Poetry for a fair play not a foul play. Thanks you again for sensing a woman’s trauma Kindest regards I’m indebtedly yours niv - Copy to: Hon’ble Poet Terence George Craddock

The Psychopath Sadist Uninhibited ID On continuous Contemplation Belowbeltline. [1] It's not just women who get preyed upon with rabid comments by the nasty bullies who have left the playground but not their old habits. 'Vile stalker of shadow slime' is a line that would fit well in this poem. All the worst comments I received were all from the same male. When I checked such comments of his went back at least two years. Some of us aim to try to express and sow beauty within this world. We may wrote a few poems like this upon topics we would rather not have to deal with, but when a voice is necessary it must speak out for that which is just and virtuous. Excellent lines to confront the stalkers from the shadows. 10+++++

No apologies needed, where would we be without the ladies in our lives. You have said it masterfully and I enjoyed the read very much. Lynn

Very much appropriate and in blatant way the Poet Protested …and it was needed… We readers must en masse come forward and join hands to flush out pollutants. Every word is loaded with power dynamite…explosive…to stir the phlegmatic so called peace seekers… A few quotes below: [1] Uninhibited ID /On continuous/Contemplation Belowbeltline’ – loves to stay and breed thoughts likewise [2] ‘In Hitlist Targetlist/We Women Are In’ – and a Perfect sure why why and why? [3] ‘Uncontrolled Queasy Vile Eros’ - They thrive on such psychic oxygen [4] ‘Pregnancy Termination’ – Where right gene has been flagged out …and kibosh seeing light of world [5] ‘Smilingly Opt For Kidless Life.’ – Out of desperation such resolution what a pity to civil societymen [6] ‘Find Space …No Spycam/Walk Dignifiedly Fearlessly’ – Desperate yearning for getting the fundamental rights. [7] ‘We’ll Be Lovegivercarer’ – Her [women in general] commitment and allegiance to human fraternity. I thank Poet for such a protesting and spine erect stand against all such unjust inflicted to women. Thanks for patience reading 10++ PS I thank all readers who came forward to protest specially Dr. Kar

World can never be completely sanitized from Inaesthetic Pollutions. Every amount of genetic engineering will prove futile. I’ve read comments and find all agree unanimously to curb all these. It was needed thru a process called Psychical ‘-Reconstruction-Engineering’ [PRE] Poem itself specks in favor of PRE. Indeed why since ageless time women folk are the prey? Let all walks of life stand together against such things. Pledge ‘We Can’ and ‘We Will’. Thanks all readers for standing against all bad comments against Poet Ms. Nivedita. 10++

Agree with Poet ‘…over all soul’s sanitization…’. Dr. Kar has ably voiced against such pollution. As woman Poet she has expressed all types of feminine cooperation what usually they render still such pollutants reside and make us heavy parched… Very bold and straight poetic dialogue with positive approach 10++

interesting bunch of ifs i do not believe in cloning but if some evil traits can be removed great

a sensible write. shan

A very strong, contemporary message delivered with drama and vitality.An original mind is definately at work here.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

I like the way you let go the building steam in you; I have felt it many times. On the matter of future tech advancements, I would like to say that the way bio technology is being developed with out any self control on the part of the scientists 'on what is right and what is wrong'; a day of reckoning will soon confront us as we seek to challenge God. Research if misused can play havoc with a lot of innocent people. Hope the predators of this unchallenged development will take heed.

well a very authentic and rsponsible write. you have covered all aspects.brilliant and timely. voted 10 for you surya

Hello Niv, For few days I was away from here and so also my reading and writing.... Read your Inaesthetic Global Pollution and it's a poem of your grave thoughts about all the polluting features going on in the current times especially those where women folk in general got affected... gender testing, abortion and so on... Your expressions are always very 'calling a spade a spade' type... I like it. You always make your readers thinking for some good time even after the reading. Here also you've provided a good amount of thoughts for the readers to ponder. Keep it up, Kaku.

Its stunning Poem and bold and thro’ and thro’… Males [some] contemplate and pamper the idea in male domination… poet was thunder struck by some lunatic…vile sot guy… I’ve read all the comments of that guy…I feel the need…to write a strong and straight comment [not psychically dyslectic, aesthetically dwindled, visually hazy and biblio bypassing]: Put such person in ‘Block Hole’ let their all his vilevirile instinct be ‘clamped-smothered-fired-extinguished’ and such danger in poetic milieu should be addressed as Hon’ble Poets Dr. Shubbendu Kar, Sr. Ma’am Amelida Knight, Sr. John, Obed, Abhinab Vinod, Ma’am Indira, Gloss Glitter, Siddhartha and Amitabha have done…and I sincerely congratulate them… The Poet Ms. Nivedita wrote, ‘…I’d the trauma by vile-lech personal attack and thro’ comment on my poems …also disfigured to satiate eros…and suffering still ~ niv’… My dismay is that women poets are only two in number who wrote rejoinder ... may be women love noninvolvement…fear why? of what? ...I’m not infusing adrenaline to women rather they should know the gravity and depth of such hits…in spite of Ms. Nivedita’s appeal [quoted just above]… are women love to stay in their old oppressive ‘locus standi ‘… its riddles to me… Will Hon’ble Women poets ponder? Why women will stay spoonfade by male? Sure I’m if one stays as skin saver …it’ll never make womens’ position safer rather It’ll encourage and hike enthusiasm of such guy to hurl and hit more and in abundance…let us be optimistic…women will come more forward and put-down-curb-down-chock-check such guys…scot-free why them? It’s a really poetically very befitting, strong snub and vital hit to such guys [within aesthetic limit]…a great come back Ms. Nivedita … Thanks for your well chosen decision’… Smilingly Opt For Kidless Life….’ 10+++

Respected Dada [Poet Dr. Subhendu Kar], Pranam neben … amazing comment to storm [wake up call] the sensible readers / poets… against the trauma I’ve faced [mostly women are the target]… Your comment like ‘Conscience Everest’... Shining and Standing aesthetically percolating out all the goodness purity into the grey cells of us...and debug all evils... I wish if many were like you … a better habitable place this planate …our solemn dream will come into a reality … I’m hopeful Aesthetic Dawn will rise and make us pure purer purest … Regards niv - Copy to Respected Poet Dr. Subhendu Kar

well written.... i don't think i will be one of them that will hate your poems....

In Hitlist Targetlist We Women Are In.............................Women will be as always.No one or very few know it was a Jewish woman who dumped Hitler's proposal and the World saw the aftermath. I hope you will come round.Ailments like clouds have their linings too-i don't know whether is silver or golden...but it is it. Good and prolific effort Do read my new poem ~KITES~ and do watch my story in the upcoming hindi movie KITES as well.