Salam bhejun!
payam bhejun!
mein unn nigaahon ko ratjagon ka inaam bhejun!
inaam essa
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wah..waah...kia khoob kaha aap ne...aur likthay rah keejiyega..
Wah wah.....Unki marzi woh jaane...Aap ne apni keh li...Humne bhi bhi ismein apni haami bharli....Umda ghazal.
that was payam, inaam to poetry, inteqam to words................all mingled :)
Nice flow in the poem....good craftsmanship matured writing, i like the poem, i would like to give the poem100/100.
An excellent poem in blank verse pattern. Thanks for sharing.