In Your Wait Poem by Nikita Gupta

In Your Wait

Rating: 4.9


Clump of twinkling stars, lustering as diamonds
I slept on the step under the widespread sky.
Cooling breeze, whirling wind and the blurry beam of the moonlight
Wrapping me with ardor
That acquainted me of your presence
Though I was lone: yet not;
Looking up at the night sky
Filled with stars
Thinking of you in the darkest night
Listening to the swirling winds,
I can see the brightest light in the sky
Obey it, it will bring you to me
Come back home
Lead by the starlight
And you will find your angel
Waiting for you, to warm you
Shining brighter than any star.

In Your Wait
Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,wait
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written when the writer was waiting for several days to see her beloved. She dedicates this verse to her beloved as the wait for him made her to write the first poem of her life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 13 March 2019

Waiting for love is a beautiful trait of romanticism .., ..fine poetry

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Julia Luber 12 March 2019

Internalizes the draw of the stars on the eyes as he would like to draw in a Lover.

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Nikita Gupta 13 March 2019

yes exactly i thought someone would interpret as such

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Prabir Gayen 13 March 2019

I can see the brightest light in the sky Obey it, it will bring you to me Come back home Lead by the starlight And you will find your angel Waiting for you, to warm you Shining brighter than any star ....very beautiful poem ❤

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Nikita Gupta 13 March 2019

Thank You So Much.. hope my poem will relate to many

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 June 2019

I can see the brightest light in the sky Obey it, it will bring you to me Come back home Lead by the starlight And you will find your angel....../// beautiful poetic expression;

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Nikita Gupta. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 April 2019

your heart over swells with love all over stay tuned to the stars then from there will come your lover Till then read my MOMS'SMILES

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Ayan Mondal 15 March 2019

Nice...10+++++++++++++

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Ayan Mondal 15 March 2019

Great thought dera poet.....

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