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My dear Mamta, how poignant. How could anyone resist a tall yellow lily asking for forgiveness? The imagery is exquisite and so nostalgic. A truly beautiful write. Love again, SandraX

lovely and great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

How very true! The wearer only knows where the shoe pinches and so do you! Sorrow shared can be halved only in Empathy, it cannot be reduced with lip- service or with mere sympathy! On this earth we may not get all our dues! Freedom from re-birth and soul's peaceful rest, remains the ultimate 'due' which the Gods bless! These are my personal views! 10+ -Raj Nandy

mamtaji, you walk with a pebble inside your shoes.......... i know it's poetrry.............

Its disappointing...when they slip into new shoes and seem alien while we try to come closer....it hurts a lot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very nice write!

in your shoes.......... well woven words and great expression..........