Sunday, November 8, 2009

In Your Shoes Comments

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In Your Shoes
I feel like a lonely leaf
High up on a tree,
Buffeted, with no relief
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Paul Holmes
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Kranthi Pothineni 08 November 2009

A painful and sad poem is expressed well. Each verse is moving with painful words and the repetition gave it life. Painful write.

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