Friday, June 20, 2014

In Your Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.9

Though fate has thrown distance between us,
In your shadow I still remain,
Your heart and mine now beat as one,
I breathe your air, I sense your pain
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Lora Colon
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Heather Wilkins 03 July 2014

in your shadow the air is sweeter. the air is always sweeter in the shadow of a loved one. sweetly written

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Heather Wilkins 03 July 2014

in your shadow the air is sweeter. the air is always sweeter in the shadow of a loved one. sweetly written

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Darlene Walsh 23 June 2014

I hope the distance diminishes and you can both again share each others shadow.

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Brian Johnston 21 June 2014

'Alas, the fragrance (of faded flowers of love) was not lost.' Such a poignant line... I feel a new echo poem coming on! Look for it to be posted soon... 'The Fragrance of Love's Faded Flowers! ' Oh how many ways there are to view the mountain, how many ways to hold the past, and what a difference our choices can make! Write on Dear Poet of the Heart... Feel deeply but please always CHOOSE LIFE, CHOOSE LOVE!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 21 June 2014

In your shadow I know contentment, Exiled dreams... just a memory with such fervour you write!

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Aura Z 20 June 2014

i like it sooo much! .. Hope this shadow still wait for u to come and come to u if you don't :)

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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