Friday, July 19, 2013

In Your Lap Comments

Rating: 4.5

They all rush in from the heaven
With lighted lamps
When I lay my head on your lap
And your hand caressing my forehead
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

this poem has a quiet peaceful feel. nice writing. I like this one

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2013

Good write. Full of peace...flight of all worries.. Very well said.

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Sallam Yassin 19 July 2013

And in the world of peace I see the flight of all my worries / Amen

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