Sunday, August 29, 2010

In Your Heart My Love Reside Comments

Rating: 4.3

Silence knocks the door of the night
Wave of coldness felt, cannot hide
Solitude blew frozen kiss, desire for love inside
Be strong my heart, to carry love inside
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

I know you miss your love in me very hard I'm realized that i wrongly decide We shouldn't be far apart let the loves close to their hearts Wonderful gift from God to make life moves on There is no end for our loves stop to keep breathe on... touching expression with nice theme. It is belived that heart is a guard for love and soul to stay protected. Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

For my love to reside! Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

lovely poem.......///////

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Kanav Justa 25 May 2013

in most of the poems that you write, , , you dont use more of rhyming words, , , and still those poems look perfect, , , here you have used good rhyming words and it has made this one even more beautiful, , , feels good to read such kind of poem, , MISS

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Captain Cur 27 June 2012

The theme you were looking for worked well. The steady repetitious rhymes added to the effect of the overall feelings addressed by this poem. You can think love in the head, but only feel it in the heart.

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Cristina Teodor 19 September 2011

I liked the intensity of love and emotions shown in each word.A great poem straight from your heart..Cristina Teodor

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Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

This is a beautiful love poem, and it's quite romantic, if I may say. Great writing! I expect no less from you.

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Dave Walker 15 September 2011

Love is the best thing in the world. And to. Find love is even beter. Good poem.

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Kevin Carney 05 September 2010

For a first love poem this is great. You captured emotion and such feeling.you have definately proved that can capture love and romance in your words. Please keep writing this was beautiful.

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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2010

Be strong my heart, to carry love inside fear not sweet heart for the love of two must ever make a stronger happier you love is a decision to love to give everything without regret, a beautiful love growing in love

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