Silence knocks the door of the night
Wave of coldness felt, cannot hide
Solitude blew frozen kiss, desire for love inside
Be strong my heart, to carry love inside
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in most of the poems that you write, , , you dont use more of rhyming words, , , and still those poems look perfect, , , here you have used good rhyming words and it has made this one even more beautiful, , , feels good to read such kind of poem, , MISS
The theme you were looking for worked well. The steady repetitious rhymes added to the effect of the overall feelings addressed by this poem. You can think love in the head, but only feel it in the heart.
I liked the intensity of love and emotions shown in each word.A great poem straight from your heart..Cristina Teodor
This is a beautiful love poem, and it's quite romantic, if I may say. Great writing! I expect no less from you.
Love is the best thing in the world. And to. Find love is even beter. Good poem.
For a first love poem this is great. You captured emotion and such feeling.you have definately proved that can capture love and romance in your words. Please keep writing this was beautiful.
Be strong my heart, to carry love inside fear not sweet heart for the love of two must ever make a stronger happier you love is a decision to love to give everything without regret, a beautiful love growing in love
I know you miss your love in me very hard I'm realized that i wrongly decide We shouldn't be far apart let the loves close to their hearts Wonderful gift from God to make life moves on There is no end for our loves stop to keep breathe on... touching expression with nice theme. It is belived that heart is a guard for love and soul to stay protected. Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.