Saturday, October 17, 2015

In Your Heart Comments

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In your heart, so between, in your nerves
I build my hut, so let’s spin, this love of halves
In your blood, so within, this love of might
In vast flood, so between, without any plight
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Amos Ojwang'
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2016

Nerves Halves might plight live believe conceive weave such a perfect rhyming my dear poet. Kudos. wonderful. How difficult it is to write like that and so much thinking, when you write. thank you very dear poet for this poem. tony

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Paul Amrod 30 November 2015

Hi Amos, A very nice play with words that touches my heart, Thanks alot, Paul

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Amos O. Ojwang' 21 November 2015

Thanks Edward for your comment

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2015

So within; with the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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