Thursday, October 12, 2017

In Your Golden Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

Being clouds of light in this horizon,
Swimming in your golden ocean we are,
Feathers of wisdom of creation of joy,
We have captured emotion in light.
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Chris Embrick 14 October 2017

God saw the first sunrise in his mind before he created the light. The sun is a life giver, given by the greatest Life Giver. God's light is an eternal dawn. God saw the dawn and smiled knowing that his creation would do the same. Thank you dear friend. Another beautiful poem. 10+++

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Rini Shibu 13 October 2017

Light the sun rays, the spirit of God is touching our hearts.. And you have beautifully written

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2017

Lovely poem in praise of a fascinating sunrise and the blessings of God coming to us through His 'merciful rays'. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 October 2017

creation of joy, rise like sun, beautiful life sir, namaskar

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such a heartwarming and uplifting poem, Kumarmani.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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